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  • Gaza, Get an Airport or Get a Life
    • Maher July 25, 2012 at 7:16 pm with 1 replies

      Unreservedly, there are many things motivate me (Also all the readers) read someone's writing carefully, like the form of the topic (E.g. theme and title), forew
      -ord and the being of the writer. Really, I found the best of these things in your
      writing, so I always read it carefully, and I think the proof is, writing this comment.
      First, you have lucid and obscure title (in the same time) which makes the reader be excited to read what you wrote. But about pictures which you attached, first picture takes the role of making the title more luchid partly, and the second one, it
      completely takes the part of makin' the topic more shaply.
      Secondly, "And thereby hangs a tale. And therein lies my pain." these two sentences let me think about your topic. After one minute of thinkin', the first piture, the title and the first two sentnces renderd me to know that your topic is about ur
      suffering of traviling from Gaza. Undoubtedly, Your case makes you so different from other travelers , soyour story really worth enough to mintion.
      Thirldy, out of courtesy, you own the favored writer's characteristics, so that you are now front paged on Mondoweiss and always lots go on reading what u write.
      Fourth, Newscasts can't puplish and descripe all what happens in a land, so you can't know about the land without living 'n it. even our neighbor countries don't know anything about us, so we have to go on publishing to others what is happining.
      Fifth, I really liked lots of words in this essay. Also I liked putting the conversation 'nd mixing it with some Egyption Arabic. In addition, I wanna answer your last question "wouldn’t it be a bit less confusing if we had an airport in Gaza?", first we have to own our Gaza, then it wouldn't be ^__^.
      Finally, I wish you'll enjoy having your scholarship in America, and come back to your future husband. Go on in writing and do't let anything stop in your way of making your dreams come true. May God fill your life with happiness and blessings.
      Best Wishes

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